Im trying haiku

Vendela · 10-14-2001, 09:08 AM

There lay naught but broken wood
On land upon which it'd stood
We finally understood
perhaps for the greater good?

There lay broken wood
On land upon which it'd stood
I now understood

**BlakByuty** · 10-14-2001, 09:14 PM

that was cool

**BlkOpal** · 10-15-2001, 04:01 AM

beautiful Vendela!

peace&Luv
BlkOpal

Laydee-B · 10-15-2001, 05:06 AM

THAT WAS GOOOOOOOOOOD GURL ...............KEEP IT UP

Soul Deep · 10-18-2001, 01:35 AM

can i say i respect ya?!
yup, yup...

10-14-2001, 09:08 AM	#1 (permalink)
Vendela Registered User Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: am a BuckEyE Posts: 194 Points: 6,638.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 6,638.00 Donate Rep Power: 0	Im trying haiku There lay naught but broken wood On land upon which it'd stood We finally understood perhaps for the greater good? There lay broken wood On land upon which it'd stood I now understood __________________ The absence of evidence is not evidence of absence.

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BlakByuty Ijeoma Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: Auburn Hills, MI Posts: 9,459 Points: 2,113.00 Bank: 14,899.25 Total Points: 17,012.25 Donate Rep Power: 113	that was cool __________________ <FONT size="1"><FONT color="#FF33CC"><i>If these hips could talk...</i></FONT></FONT> <b>"Focus...What the hell are you doing?"</b>

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BlkOpal Elder Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: D L Posts: 2,756 Points: 250.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 250.00 Donate Rep Power: 28	beautiful Vendela! peace&Luv BlkOpal __________________ creature of emotions...temptation of the flesh.

10-15-2001, 05:06 AM	#4 (permalink)
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10-18-2001, 01:35 AM	#5 (permalink)
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