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05-24-2004, 10:34 PM
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Liquid fire
I wanna put you to my mouth and feel your warmth pour over my lips.
Feel that rush that you give me when I swallow you slowly. You fill me with heat, my head gets woozy. My spine starts to tingle as my legs slowly start to relax. I'm dropping off, falling down. My world is spinning. But I can't seem to get enough of you I take another swallow. I feel you fill my cheeks, run down my throat. You warm the pit of my belly and the heat from you diffuses through me. I know that when I leave everyone will smell you on my breath. But I don't care. I need you, I can't do without you. When I am down you're always there. You always give me just what I need. My friends say I should leave you. That you're not good for me. They think I'm too dependent on you but that can't be true. I seek you and you comfort me. You fill me, ease my pain. I am so hooked on you. So again I lick around your head. And finish off the last drop of your heat. And as I lay here in the afterglow of your warmth I think to myself "I need to go to the liquor store tomorrow" My love for these men. Captain Morgan and Jack Daniels. 
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05-24-2004, 10:37 PM
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knew u couldnt pull this off with real men....
Alcoholic!! nice one..
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05-24-2004, 10:39 PM
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Psalm 42:1 As the deer pants for the water brooks, so pants my soul for You, O God. Best Independent Film of the year. Buy the DVD at http://www.nighttofly.com |
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05-24-2004, 10:45 PM
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Whoa!...I'm getting turned on reading until i saw the liquour store part. Nice one though!.
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05-24-2004, 10:45 PM
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lol...nasty girl....
Its good...I can imagine getting it forwarded to my email...one of those things where it says "don't scroll to the bottom"...and "forward to 5 people or Captain Morgan will rise from the dead and steal all the booty from your house mate...arggghhhh" I digress...anyway...this was cool 
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05-24-2004, 10:47 PM
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lol... half way through it I figured it was alcohol. Actually around here:
My spine starts to tingle as my legs slowly start to relax. but most especially here: But I can't seem to get enough of you I take another swallow. I feel you fill my cheeks, run down my throat. You warm the pit of my belly and the heat from you diffuses through me. I know that when I leave everyone will smell you on my breath. Nicely written... well described. |
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05-24-2004, 10:50 PM
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thanks.
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05-24-2004, 10:51 PM
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05-24-2004, 10:52 PM
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Psalm 42:1 As the deer pants for the water brooks, so pants my soul for You, O God. Best Independent Film of the year. Buy the DVD at http://www.nighttofly.com |
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05-24-2004, 11:20 PM
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thanks
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05-24-2004, 11:21 PM
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....lol...nice poem. I knew at the end you'd make it seem as if you were talking about something innocent. Nice try, but we both know what you were really talking about.
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05-24-2004, 11:33 PM
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Nice one. Knew you would turn it to liquor, but I still sweat small. Heh heh.
Very well written though. RB.
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Oh oh! Very impressive. You filled me up.
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