Nice...
message =
author looks at love, relationships, dreams and life in the 'now'
acknowledges the fears inherent
imagery and assonance =
building walls, piercing with a dagger, revealing
newness, openness, living, giving, willing, fantasy, fallacy, alludes, eludes etc
Me likes the
The daggers will pierce
And the sand and the clay
Must go up
..Daggers - mishaps, may be scratches or fatal (author silent)
The effects though, rather than that of death in the sinking forgotten six feet, the memories of the fear/lesson learnt refuses to go.
