Just because

Laydee-B · 09-26-2007, 02:38 AM

Just because you see me crying does not mean I’m sad
When I try to eat I can’t chew but dude don’t take it as if I’m starving over you
I’ve found it hard to come around but don’t feel as if you’ve won
My tears leak in my sleep but my heart won’t bleed for long
I won’t mourn to our song
Throw out your stuff
Burn the sheets we first did it on
Cut your pictures but keep the letters
Use them as tissues to wipe your dirt on
You never read in between me only on the surface
Disregarding my true purpose
Loving me conveniently
Teasing me endlessly
Straggling me along by a string I turn puppet for him
Maneuvering over manholes and cracks with no possible call backs
We are hearts at war
Struggling to keep our sanity we debate over whether it’s too early or too late
You want two plates of fine cuisine
One for right now the other for take away
I can’t be second place

Bolanle Emmanuel ----------[2007] © ®

purevirgin · 09-28-2007, 04:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Laydee-B

Just because you see me crying does not mean I’m sad
When I try to eat I can’t chew but dude don’t take it as if I’m starving over you
I’ve found it hard to come around but don’t feel as if you’ve won
My tears leak in my sleep but my heart won’t bleed for long
I won’t mourn to our song
Throw out your stuff
Burn the sheets we first did it on
Cut your pictures but keep the letters
Use them as tissues to wipe your dirt on
You never read in between me only on the surface
Disregarding my true purpose
Loving me conveniently
Teasing me endlessly
Straggling me along by a string I turn puppet for him
Maneuvering over manholes and cracks with no possible call backs
We are hearts at war
Struggling to keep our sanity we debate over whether it’s too early or too late
You want two plates of fine cuisine
One for right now the other for take away
I can’t be second place

Bolanle Emmanuel ----------[2007] © ®

Hey, this is good!!! I really do like ur play with words, and the way u spin it, i lovvvvvvvvvveeee the rythms n all.
Keep it up.

zerose · 10-22-2007, 02:17 AM

(snap, snap) i like how u summed it up w/ can't be second place

Misty · 10-22-2007, 07:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Laydee-B

Just because you see me crying does not mean I’m sad
When I try to eat I can’t chew but dude don’t take it as if I’m starving over you
I’ve found it hard to come around but don’t feel as if you’ve won
My tears leak in my sleep but my heart won’t bleed for long
I won’t mourn to our song
Throw out your stuff
Burn the sheets we first did it on
Cut your pictures but keep the letters
Use them as tissues to wipe your dirt on
You never read in between me only on the surface
Disregarding my true purpose
Loving me conveniently
Teasing me endlessly
Straggling me along by a string I turn puppet for him
Maneuvering over manholes and cracks with no possible call backs
We are hearts at war
Struggling to keep our sanity we debate over whether it’s too early or too late
You want two plates of fine cuisine
One for right now the other for take away
I can’t be second place

Bolanle Emmanuel ----------[2007] © ®

these poems

Emi · 11-17-2007, 08:20 AM

noice!

Jay Luv · 11-27-2007, 10:29 PM

Good look gurl, you really did it well.
I like it. Lol.

09-26-2007, 02:38 AM	#1 (permalink)
Laydee-B Moderator Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 8,010 Points: 54,010.25 Bank: 5,000,207.13 Total Points: 5,054,217.38 Donate Rep Power: 1732215	Just because Just because you see me crying does not mean I’m sad When I try to eat I can’t chew but dude don’t take it as if I’m starving over you I’ve found it hard to come around but don’t feel as if you’ve won My tears leak in my sleep but my heart won’t bleed for long I won’t mourn to our song Throw out your stuff Burn the sheets we first did it on Cut your pictures but keep the letters Use them as tissues to wipe your dirt on You never read in between me only on the surface Disregarding my true purpose Loving me conveniently Teasing me endlessly Straggling me along by a string I turn puppet for him Maneuvering over manholes and cracks with no possible call backs We are hearts at war Struggling to keep our sanity we debate over whether it’s too early or too late You want two plates of fine cuisine One for right now the other for take away I can’t be second place Bolanle Emmanuel ----------[2007] © ® __________________ *What you looking at? I ain't no Mirror!*

11-17-2007, 08:20 AM	#5 (permalink)
Emi Registered User Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: busytown Posts: 605 Points: 1,531.00 Bank: 9,194.57 Total Points: 10,725.57 Donate Rep Power: 21	noice! __________________ Emi ke? Give life the benefit of the doubt: STOP euthanasia, abortions, and the death penalty. Originally posted by Boomtune: sometimes i think they should make keyboards that edit dumb responses...so that when u type nonsense the keyboard will just erase your trash from the web

11-27-2007, 10:29 PM	#6 (permalink)
Jay Luv Registered User Join Date: May 2004 Location: world wide Posts: 236 Points: 1,973.85 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 1,973.85 Donate Rep Power: 17	Good look gurl, you really did it well. I like it. Lol. __________________ 'Dont speak to fools, dey scorn d wisdom of ur words'

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10-22-2007, 02:17 AM	#3 (permalink)
zerose Registered User Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 8 Points: 3,417.75 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 3,417.75 Donate Rep Power: 0	(snap, snap) i like how u summed it up w/ can't be second place

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