HYPNO- -TISED!!!!!!

[purevirgin]

:frustated Hypnotised by your love...


I find it so hard to concentrate
cos i'm hypnotised by your love,
Your sweet face, and the gentleness of your smile,
I'm hypnotised by your ways,
I know we only just met,
it's just a few days ago,
It's simply inexplicable,
I'm hypnotised anyway.
I find ways to express it,
but i'm afraid,
I don't know what you would say; if i express it.
It's so difficult,
to explain, but i dream you everyday.
Each time i close my eyes all i see
is your smile, and i hear your voice
in my head; your accent is so sweet,
You touched my hands today, and it felt so warm,
You carressed your hand on my arm,
and worked your way down to my hand,
If only you know,
that's all i'll think about today,
I wish things were different,
but fate has played a fast one on me,
once again,
I know i can't have you in the way i want to,
but i know tonight i would close my eyes again
and imagine you running your warm hands
all over me,
...I know my thoughts are so wild,
wilder than myself,
but this is all so much for me,
I'm hypnotised by your love.
but like i said i can't explain
how i'm hypnotised by your love


...I only got upset cos i'm so confused,
i thought i had it all under control,
but i lost it,
and i can't express it,

[Jay Luv]

Impressive ma...really good look.

I like the picture painted and how you somehow show the thinking process of the persona. Fate pulled a fast one, 4sho. Lol.

Well done.

[Laydee-B]

This was lovely...love is a blessing

[purevirgin]

Originally Posted by Jay Luv

Impressive ma...really good look.

I like the picture painted and how you somehow show the thinking process of the persona. Fate pulled a fast one, 4sho. Lol.

Well done.

thanks a lot.

[Misty]

somehow, I can relate to this poem Nice job!!!