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Ladies 8 53.33%
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Old 03-01-2007, 02:19 AM   #1 (permalink)
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So....its about that time we get it poppin Poetically!
we're gonna have a series of 3 rounds. Judges will make the last decisions based on polls and their choices. Judges u must let us know why u choose whom ever u choose.

First round teamplayers must work together. A theme will be given to each team and teammates must produce a collaboration.
Second round each member of each team must produce their own piece here is when the strongest person from each team will be choosen to move to round three.
Third round the two strongest from each team come up with their own personal poem.

Round one
no more den 15 lines each
must stay on topic
Post no later then Saturday morning

Gurlz
FekNR,Aymix,LayDee-b
Theme:MeN...u choose 2 praise them or bash them


Boyz
Cerebral,Commoncents,Riversboy
Theme:Women.....U choose 2 praise them or bash them


I'm gonna make a seperate thread for round One....i'ma need only the judges and participants to just post sayin signing in so that i know u've read this.



oya lets go....i'm so ready...if there are any disputes about da rules or things that aren't clear get at me if not then the show will go on

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Old 03-01-2007, 06:56 AM   #2 (permalink)
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hmm, i really don't care, someone else should make the decision
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Old 03-06-2007, 07:07 AM   #3 (permalink)
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NUthin dey happen no one responded therefore Fuck it....i don enter vex stage 4 every1 except
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Here are the poems from the guys: U can tell what we chose from the content.
Sorry we are late.

Riversboy:

The finest chicks are from the Southeast.
Light skin like they don't leave their houses.
Round hips that wobble while they're moving their feet;
When she dances atilogwu I can feel the heat.
Sweet full lips have me feeling all kissy.
Smile on my face while she's giving me isi.
Don't be deceived, igbo girls go down,
and when it's time for business igbo girls don't clown.
She won't frown while I'm chasing that ego.
Down by my side stackin paper like lego.
I can't let go, you're my lucky charm,
make me wanna paint white dots on my arm
and tell your dad "there's a fruit in your yard".
I'm a suitor, Nne, bikonu I want you bad
a hundred grand on the dowry's fine
I'd pay any bride price to make you mine.


Commoncents:

It was love at first sight; she glowed like an angel in the night
I was young and so was she, but what we felt was real
I’d do anything for her, fight, scratch, steal, and even kill
But she wasn’t demanding, she always kept an even Kiel
Always soft spoken, so kind and so gentle
Humble, even though her dad had so much cattle
We’d run across the fields, through the bush to end up at our spot
Spend hours and hours sharing and marveling at our thoughts
I leaned over and kissed her, closed my eyes expecting slap
But she did nothing, I was shocked cuz she actually kissed back
She got on top of me, “I’m not that typha girl” she said as she starts crying
At that moment I wished she was, but I knew that I loved her cuz she wasn’t
Before I could reach up to console her, she gets up and runs away
Now days after days, I haven’t seen by baby, I’m going crazy
I climb on a nearby tree to peep into her place
There she stood, dressed in black lace with a net over her face
My baby was pawned off to alhaji burki, business man with no taste
With the merger of the two big families, she disappeared, without a trace….
Oh rekia mohammad.


Cerebral:

Twirling my fatherland I heard her speaking in my mother tongue
Dark and tanned as the earth, subtle and engaging as a love song
She had a pot of water on her head which she got from the stream
She walked with some much esteem, wrapped in Ankara with perfect seams
Educated with the values of our forefathers
Like the spring that rains out the cold that the winter gathers
Olorun had to breathe life into Obatala’s creation to make such perfection
And Oduduwa the messenger of God gave her direction
She like I, hail out of the clay soil of Ile-Ife
And like I, have triumphed in the eye of adversity and despair
She’s as beautiful as Yemoja, the goddess of the ocean
And becoming your protector and provider shall forever be my devotion
Though her origin is the western lands of Nigeria
You can find her in all parts of the world, from the church to the cafeteria
She might just be another woman to you, but then
This Yoruba woman is a Queen amongst women
Yoruba woman stand up with grace in the midst of your peers
For you’re the pride and souvenir of hundred years of triumph and tears
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FekNR lyrical tigress
My brother, I call you what I see.
My brother, you are my brother
look at your color you're dark as me.
My brother you use bitch to identify your sister, rather then calling her by her name.
Your mother is that same bitch, and you are the caller, yes you are the blame.
Black man makes it big, a dream he had to follow.
He takes a white women and makes her happy, only to leave his sister on the bottom.
NOW YOu'Re A SLAVE IN HER PLANTATION.
CAN'T UNDERSTAND YOuR OWN SITUATION.
THIS STARTED FROM AN INFATUATION, NOW SHE GOT YOU WITH THE MENTAL MASTURBATION
You feked yorself!

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He came to me and I was temporarily impressed
Once I peeped his game I eliminated the possibilities
Of this jerk entangling me
Cuz dudes be spitting game claiming they have that thing
Flossing bling on ashy knuckles and chains over under developed hearts
Brains the size of a sperm which you waste aimlessly roaming this earth trying to hit it
Pre-mature ejaculating
10-minute man claiming “it’s been so long since I did it.”
Excuses after excuses tryna justify your lack of testes…
Still living with mom yet you scrutinize me
Flick fake bills and claim you bone model chicks
Wear fake gold and fake grills
When rents due you pawning all your rings.
I don’t hate you just feel you’re disadvantaged
Yo feks finish'em off

FeksYou:
Big dingaling claiming
One minute slanging
Broke but try to floss
Drives a cab, but act's like the Boss
Let me stop and give you the benefit of the doubt
Sike b!tch, step up yor game, maybe I'll give you a shout
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where is Aymix's?
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where is Aymix's?
she's been MiA
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Ivana is PMS can't compose jerk when she is down
But the dudes get my vote.....no bitterness.....just putting it out there for our beautiful sisters to see
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I see we they guys won... and who are these lying chicks voting for the females... Bola next time make the polls public... we wanna now who is voting.
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I see we they guys won... and who are these lying chicks voting for the females... Bola next time make the polls public... we wanna now who is voting.
its tied so i dunno why u think ya'll won ...hmmm anyway u tryna say out stuff wasn't good just cuz we were dissin ya'lll....dude....lets move 2 round 2 i'm dying to knock u off
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its tied so i dunno why u think ya'll won ...hmmm anyway u tryna say out stuff wasn't good just cuz we were dissin ya'lll....dude....lets move 2 round 2 i'm dying to knock u off

It wasn't tied when i made that post... and since y'al don't have a deadline for the poll, how can i balme votes. ANd we were better cus we are more structured... y'al poem is everywhere, and it's not even complete.

If we move on to the next round... y'al won't smell us

And weren't there suppose to be judges... that's the only way it'll be fair.
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I'll always love and remember you

To one that is so selfless, I’ve been so selfish
And now even in your absence I can’t still help it
Longing to re-live the times we spent
Yearning to hear you speak once again

To the twin sister I never had
Thanks for loving me and being my right hand
And though through rough times I wasn’t there
You always let me know you still cared

And as you have fulfilled your mission on earth
I pray I get to touch as many people’s hearts
And if we meet again in another life
I’ll gladly take your place through pain and strife
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It wasn't tied when i made that post... and since y'al don't have a deadline for the poll, how can i balme votes. ANd we were better cus we are more structured... y'al poem is everywhere, and it's not even complete.

If we move on to the next round... y'al won't smell us

And weren't there suppose to be judges... that's the only way it'll be fair.
the judges will come into play in da second round oya lets go
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