How I Feel About Her

[Demumood]

i feel lost of words whenever she looks at me
a feeling not described in any medical books
that i have seen
a great feeling like
when the heavens make sweet love to the earth
a point where even joy seems pretentious
a safe place in my mind where i felt invisible
i felt my intellect drop
and yet still felt indivisible

until she shattered my glass world
when she told me she loves another
but i shall wait
and stick it out no matter the weather
and i believe we were set on this earth to suffer
so why should this be any different
i will just wait in a deep conscious slumber

but before i send my mind to an eternal abyss
i just wanted to tell you
for all i have been through
even when i couldnt see and i had no clue
that i made sure that i got through
and made it look cool
for wat i am about to say is true
this is how i truly feel about you

[gabyebony]

i feel like this one is not done yet. one more paragraph...what are you about to say to her?
interesting though. good job