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Old 12-09-2006, 01:04 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default I lost my words...

I lost my words



sticks, voice and hands…

He used all three to make the sound play…

picked up horn, and made it speak

used them all to tell her what he wanted to say…



He knew she'd hear him

He knew she'd listen..

She always did…but today was differen'.



A new song to play…

Switched up what he wanted to say…



He's got her attention…



Beats the congas till his palms get sore…

made him hit it again cause she wanted an encore



Intoxicating, without sin

She wanted to hear more of him,



Special request….Yes she can

"Pull out your drums and play for this band"





Drums banging, ears ringing

Bass thumping….floor squealing



she loves it…

Feels it…banging away …that's how he wants to play



STOP!

REWIND!

BACK AGAIN!




She no fit, but he wont give in.

It was the best music she ever heard…

And that's when she found her words

She… Loves…Him





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Old 12-09-2006, 01:10 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 12-09-2006, 02:05 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 12-09-2006, 02:08 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 12-09-2006, 06:29 PM   #5 (permalink)
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very nice!

you want me to sing for you?
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Old 12-09-2006, 09:02 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Lovely Piece.. imaginatively creative.
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I like that u created a scene ...intoducd the characters... love the visuals...nyce piece lady! Now can I get an encore?
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Old 12-10-2006, 01:44 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Lovely Piece.. imaginatively creative.
THank you very much!
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Old 12-10-2006, 01:47 AM   #10 (permalink)
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I like that u created a scene ...intoducd the characters... love the visuals...nyce piece lady! Now can I get an encore?
Lol thank you. It's all written metaphor-style. I love hearing others interpretations of pieces like this.
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she said she wants her hair to be just like mine when she gets to heaven.
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