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Old 12-05-2006, 02:29 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default A Letter To My Black Sistas

My black sista, won’t lie, will be one of the first to diss ya
Holding onto ur pride must leave your hands and finger tips with blisters
I’m one hundred percent of your failure, fifty percent insecure
Twenty eight years too late to hail you, tho that action can never be premature

I’m like a knife cutting through the cradle of life
And although I see your strife, I refuse to see you as a wife
My inferiority won’t let me see the difference between perception and reality
So like a prodigal son, I rip the oat of my very own mortality

Seeing you as someone to sleep with, but not one to take that leap with
Yeah one to bitch with, but when the times comes, not one to get hitched with
It will be easy to blame the TV, but the truth is the beast lies within me
I’m trapped outta my own tranquility, in which I alone have and possess the key

So before I can build a rapport, I have to stand before the man in the mirror
Acceptance is the seed that’ll enable me to mature, and the truth serve as manure
Hence now do I not only see but I fully understand your plight
So let this knight grab his shining armor, and help lead your fight
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Old 12-05-2006, 03:52 AM   #2 (permalink)
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hmmm...ok nicely written.
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Old 12-05-2006, 04:33 AM   #3 (permalink)
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hmmm...ok nicely written.

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Old 12-05-2006, 05:52 AM   #4 (permalink)
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hmmm... very nicelyarticulated! sounds like a confession...NYCE!
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Old 12-05-2006, 09:05 AM   #5 (permalink)
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wow, dat was really deep ... like it came from within for real
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Old 12-05-2006, 09:30 PM   #6 (permalink)
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twas gud!

tired of all dese poems doe, i wanna see sum action
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Old 12-07-2006, 04:42 AM   #7 (permalink)
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"and the truth serve as manure"
I love that phrase: can i borrow it"
nice poem, when i saw the title i thot it would have been the opposite of what it is, but i guess u can't judge the book by its cover.
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Old 12-10-2006, 12:12 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Old 12-12-2006, 05:30 PM   #9 (permalink)
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hmm...not a bad poem...its intentions are in question tho;
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