My great Loss

Motunrayo · 11-30-2006, 07:02 PM

I don't know how to feel right now
My heart is heavy
Mind filled with confusion
Buried & Empty
Walking the surface as if nothing is consuming me
But internally I know it's over
I can't imagine life without u
but I know that there will be a brighter day
I just don't know when the sun will come from behind the clouds
& smile on me
I'm sick just thinking of seperation
I wish it ended another way but any other way would have me feeling the same
I've NEVER EVER felt for ANYONE what i feel for u
I do love u
& even as our lives drift apart I want u to know that I always will
My emotions have killed a part of me
The most of me numb
The remainder paralyzed
I wish it never began not because I hate but because
I can't fathom living & not being associated with u
The energy that gravitates from u
Resonated into my soul
Now my mind losing control of my emotions
U a special part of my life that will never be the same
I wish this were a dream but I'm aware of the reality
Damn!
*my mind* "Just move one"
Hearing "In my mind I'll always be your girl"
but knowing this harsh reality
has brought about fatality
& I can't properly nor function as well...
I honestly pray that u find the best because that is what u desrve
I love u & I will miss u dearly

India Arie singing
"even if he isn't a part of me
I'm just happy to breath the air he breaths...
share his company"

12-03-2006, 04:44 AM

me likey

Motunrayo · 12-03-2006, 04:56 PM

Thanks luv

DaSoulChild · 12-04-2006, 01:42 PM

Lovely Piece...
All you need is an acoustic guitar, and you've got a song to work with

keep writing beautiful.. 2 thumbs up.

hotchoc · 12-04-2006, 02:23 PM

nice. can relate.

Motunrayo · 12-04-2006, 06:13 PM

DaSoulchild- thanks my dear!
hotchoc-thanks luv!

Motunrayo · 12-11-2006, 06:26 AM

11-30-2006, 07:02 PM	#1 (permalink)
Motunrayo Registered User Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Where ever you need me to be! Posts: 2,893 Points: 931.00 Bank: 3,555,035.56 Total Points: 3,555,966.56 Donate Rep Power: 226252	My great Loss I don't know how to feel right now My heart is heavy Mind filled with confusion Buried & Empty Walking the surface as if nothing is consuming me But internally I know it's over I can't imagine life without u but I know that there will be a brighter day I just don't know when the sun will come from behind the clouds & smile on me I'm sick just thinking of seperation I wish it ended another way but any other way would have me feeling the same I've NEVER EVER felt for ANYONE what i feel for u I do love u & even as our lives drift apart I want u to know that I always will My emotions have killed a part of me The most of me numb The remainder paralyzed I wish it never began not because I hate but because I can't fathom living & not being associated with u The energy that gravitates from u Resonated into my soul Now my mind losing control of my emotions U a special part of my life that will never be the same I wish this were a dream but I'm aware of the reality Damn! my mind "Just move one" Hearing "In my mind I'll always be your girl" but knowing this harsh reality has brought about fatality & I can't properly nor function as well... I honestly pray that u find the best because that is what u desrve I love u & I will miss u dearly India Arie singing "even if he isn't a part of me I'm just happy to breath the air he breaths... share his company" __________________ Happy moments, praise God. Difficult moments, seek God. Quiet moments, worship God. Painful moments, trust God. Every moment, thank God. Last edited by Motunrayo; 11-30-2006 at 07:04 PM..

12-03-2006, 04:56 PM	#3 (permalink)
Motunrayo Registered User Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Where ever you need me to be! Posts: 2,893 Points: 931.00 Bank: 3,555,035.56 Total Points: 3,555,966.56 Donate Rep Power: 226252	Thanks luv __________________ Happy moments, praise God. Difficult moments, seek God. Quiet moments, worship God. Painful moments, trust God. Every moment, thank God.

12-04-2006, 06:13 PM	#6 (permalink)
Motunrayo Registered User Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Where ever you need me to be! Posts: 2,893 Points: 931.00 Bank: 3,555,035.56 Total Points: 3,555,966.56 Donate Rep Power: 226252	DaSoulchild- thanks my dear! hotchoc-thanks luv! __________________ Happy moments, praise God. Difficult moments, seek God. Quiet moments, worship God. Painful moments, trust God. Every moment, thank God.

12-11-2006, 06:26 AM	#7 (permalink)
Motunrayo Registered User Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Where ever you need me to be! Posts: 2,893 Points: 931.00 Bank: 3,555,035.56 Total Points: 3,555,966.56 Donate Rep Power: 226252	... __________________ Happy moments, praise God. Difficult moments, seek God. Quiet moments, worship God. Painful moments, trust God. Every moment, thank God.

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DaSoulChild Registered User Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: My Fathers Arms Posts: 1,383 Points: 3,044.00 Bank: 5,203.80 Total Points: 8,247.80 Donate Rep Power: 81	Lovely Piece... All you need is an acoustic guitar, and you've got a song to work with keep writing beautiful.. 2 thumbs up.

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