InSpiRatioNoloGy --- HOpe

DaSoulChild · 11-27-2006, 01:00 PM

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With a wholeLOTTAsoul Im singing this song
For those who've LostHOpe living in the wrong
Keep your Head Up N Let your Faith
We've heard your faded voices
We've heard your faded cries
Slowly your Life is steadily being Jeopardized
Evicted from your Home.. your status has been denied
Kicked to curb livin beneath the street lights
Lost everything the world has blinded your sight
Allow Him to work on You
To Revive your Life A'New

wholeLOTTAsoul's:
Aging before u’re aged
Life like a skew circle
It ain easy getting lost in all dis
Wonderin where God is, did that man fall asleep?
Thinking u must’a sinned must’a done som’n wrong
Must truly deserve to have ur life so messed up
Teen son locked up, teen daughters no school
Reminding you of an autobiography of u

DSC:
Phone Cut off going on 7 weeks
Head above water trying to make all ends meet
You've been hustlin-struglin ever since
Working 3 jobs n it don't make no sense
Simply cuz u're broke u compromise your innocense
Sliding down poles like uz a fireman
This story's too sad
Laydee-B!!... Lets Hear you play Your Violin

Laydee-B:

Why we were put here remains a mystery
Chaos & havoc seems to be all u see
No one seems to care…so u continue to sulk in ur own misery
How can u have faith when ur broke & rents due on the 8th
ur battlin for ur sanity---Where does it end?
First step to recovery is acceptance
Life's a blessin stop stressin & focus on progressin
The best gifts in life require no credit card
No fees-Just faith & ur dreams!

DSC:
This piece was simply writen to say.
Dont Ever Give Up Hope
The Lord would never give you more
Than you can ever cope
Just keep on believing and He will
Show you the way to Go
About Mining your all your Tr.Ou.BL..eS
Eventually Refining them to GOLD!!

Laydee-B · 11-29-2006, 04:41 AM

Beautiful! i'm stickying dis bad boy!

Olukoso · 03-11-2007, 03:05 AM

nice.

OmoOvie · 07-03-2007, 06:55 PM

...but how do I post my own poetry? I keep seeing the "New Thread" button but I don't know if that's the same thing as posting. Let me know. Thanks.

By the way, this is quite a good song! Keep it up!

Laydee-B · 07-03-2007, 08:19 PM

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Originally Posted by OmoOvie

...but how do I post my own poetry? I keep seeing the "New Thread" button but I don't know if that's the same thing as posting. Let me know. Thanks.

By the way, this is quite a good song! Keep it up!

CLICK NEW THREAD TO POST UR POEMS

Jay Luv · 09-23-2007, 06:55 PM

Lovely, definitely some conscious vibe up in here. Well scripted rhymes and collaboration. It's real.

Glad to back after a long walk. Lol.

11-27-2006, 01:00 PM	#1 (permalink)
DaSoulChild Registered User Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: My Fathers Arms Posts: 1,383 Points: 3,044.00 Bank: 5,203.80 Total Points: 8,247.80 Donate Rep Power: 81	InSpiRatioNoloGy --- HOpe DSC: With a wholeLOTTAsoul Im singing this song For those who've LostHOpe living in the wrong Keep your Head Up N Let your Faith We've heard your faded voices We've heard your faded cries Slowly your Life is steadily being Jeopardized Evicted from your Home.. your status has been denied Kicked to curb livin beneath the street lights Lost everything the world has blinded your sight Allow Him to work on You To Revive your Life A'New wholeLOTTAsoul's: Aging before u’re aged Life like a skew circle It ain easy getting lost in all dis Wonderin where God is, did that man fall asleep? Thinking u must’a sinned must’a done som’n wrong Must truly deserve to have ur life so messed up Teen son locked up, teen daughters no school Reminding you of an autobiography of u DSC: Phone Cut off going on 7 weeks Head above water trying to make all ends meet You've been hustlin-struglin ever since Working 3 jobs n it don't make no sense Simply cuz u're broke u compromise your innocense Sliding down poles like uz a fireman This story's too sad Laydee-B!!... Lets Hear you play Your Violin Laydee-B: Why we were put here remains a mystery Chaos & havoc seems to be all u see No one seems to care…so u continue to sulk in ur own misery How can u have faith when ur broke & rents due on the 8th ur battlin for ur sanity---Where does it end? First step to recovery is acceptance Life's a blessin stop stressin & focus on progressin The best gifts in life require no credit card No fees-Just faith & ur dreams! DSC: This piece was simply writen to say. Dont Ever Give Up Hope The Lord would never give you more Than you can ever cope Just keep on believing and He will Show you the way to Go About Mining your all your Tr.Ou.BL..eS Eventually Refining them to GOLD!!

11-29-2006, 04:41 AM	#2 (permalink)
Laydee-B Moderator Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 8,010 Points: 54,010.25 Bank: 5,000,207.13 Total Points: 5,054,217.38 Donate Rep Power: 1732215	Beautiful! i'm stickying dis bad boy! __________________ *What you looking at? I ain't no Mirror!*

03-11-2007, 03:05 AM	#3 (permalink)
Olukoso Registered User Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: uk Posts: 66 Points: 658.20 Bank: 6,414.09 Total Points: 7,072.29 Donate Rep Power: 0	nice. __________________ xix <> *Alpha* Last edited by Olukoso; 03-14-2007 at 10:23 PM..

07-03-2007, 06:55 PM	#4 (permalink)
OmoOvie Registered User Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Jando Posts: 15 Points: 323.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 323.00 Donate Rep Power: 0	Abeg no look me like mumu oh... ...but how do I post my own poetry? I keep seeing the "New Thread" button but I don't know if that's the same thing as posting. Let me know. Thanks. By the way, this is quite a good song! Keep it up! __________________ As much as Naija sucks now, there is hope. You no dey fear? :kneel: It isn't hard to be good from time to time. What's tough is being good every day. - Willie Mays

09-23-2007, 06:55 PM	#6 (permalink)
Jay Luv Registered User Join Date: May 2004 Location: world wide Posts: 236 Points: 1,973.85 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 1,973.85 Donate Rep Power: 17	Lovely, definitely some conscious vibe up in here. Well scripted rhymes and collaboration. It's real. Glad to back after a long walk. Lol. __________________ 'Dont speak to fools, dey scorn d wisdom of ur words'

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