*New Poetry Forum Rules*

Laydee-B · 10-06-2006, 08:16 AM

*No Post Unless they have something to do with poetry...they will be deleted if not.

* PLS if you're using someone elses poetry please cite the source. No be Poetry Thief...!!! (this pisses me off give credit where its due)

*PLs try and comment on others works but don't make bad comments because you don't like the person...read their work.

*Pls include a warning in the title of any poem with explicit content.

*PlS do not ram the forum with too many of your poems in one day.Space it out we wanna see what u got but in moderation.

Now lets get drunk off PoeTree

Mr flex · 10-10-2006, 05:58 PM

thats right baby

HellaGorgeous · 04-23-2009, 10:54 PM

baba_ibadan · 10-21-2009, 09:11 AM

What ever happened to this place? Since no one is writing, can we go poem-hunting.... for new good ones...

Don Brizio · 10-21-2009, 09:32 AM

Its an original...critics are hghly welcome

SORROW, MY SOULMATE

A stolen ring is what you were
And yet my dear, a perfect fit
It’s hard to explain why you are not here
My stolen ring, my perfect fit
It’s not hard to see that fate made you the one for me
Yet played no role in d reversal
All I can dream of is what could have been
I wake still to the reality of what is
You are gone truly, my happiness
Ever since, I have strived for completeness
I just found though, I’m not alone
I found today, sorrow, my soul mate
Brizio....2009

hazan · 11-07-2009, 06:27 PM

i'mleaving...?

Laydee-B · 12-06-2009, 12:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hazan

i'mleaving...?

where u going?

minglemoon · 12-06-2009, 01:47 PM

allbeback

10-06-2006, 08:16 AM	#1 (permalink)
Laydee-B Moderator Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 8,010 Points: 54,010.25 Bank: 5,000,207.13 Total Points: 5,054,217.38 Donate Rep Power: 1732214	*New Poetry Forum Rules* No Post Unless they have something to do with poetry...they will be deleted if not. PLS if you're using someone elses poetry please cite the source. No be Poetry Thief...!!! (this pisses me off give credit where its due) PLs try and comment on others works but don't make bad comments because you don't like the person...read their work. Pls include a warning in the title of any poem with explicit content. PlS do not ram the forum with too many of your poems in one day.Space it out we wanna see what u got but in moderation. Now lets get drunk off PoeTree __________________ What you looking at? I ain't no Mirror!* Last edited by Laydee-B; 01-27-2007 at 08:40 AM..

10-10-2006, 05:58 PM	#2 (permalink)
Mr flex Registered User Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: in my house ofcourse Posts: 15 Points: 41.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 41.00 Donate Rep Power: 0	thats right baby __________________ determination is the cutting edge to success; being first is not allways the best, but putting in all your best.

10-21-2009, 09:11 AM	#4 (permalink)
baba_ibadan Registered User Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 466 Points: 26,288.16 Bank: 5,374,390.65 Total Points: 5,400,678.81 Donate Rep Power: 3225177	What ever happened to this place? Since no one is writing, can we go poem-hunting.... for new good ones... __________________ Simplicity is the Ultimate sofistication. L. Da Vinci.

10-21-2009, 09:32 AM	#5 (permalink)
Don Brizio Registered User Join Date: May 2006 Location: at the moment... Posts: 61 Points: 5,211.96 Bank: 8,300.30 Total Points: 13,512.26 Donate Blog Entries: 2 Rep Power: 0	Its an original...critics are hghly welcome SORROW, MY SOULMATE A stolen ring is what you were And yet my dear, a perfect fit It’s hard to explain why you are not here My stolen ring, my perfect fit It’s not hard to see that fate made you the one for me Yet played no role in d reversal All I can dream of is what could have been I wake still to the reality of what is You are gone truly, my happiness Ever since, I have strived for completeness I just found though, I’m not alone I found today, sorrow, my soul mate Brizio....2009 __________________ ~D Foundation~ http://donbrizio.blogpot.com God have mercy on ma enemies......cos i won't

12-06-2009, 01:47 PM	#8 (permalink)
minglemoon NR's wine Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: NR planet Posts: 3,238 Points: 78,962,597.70 Bank: 68,579,279.81 Total Points: 147,541,877.51 Donate Rep Power: 21474853	allbeback __________________ To those whom i shoot,forgive the depths. oh ok...i mean. To those who get the horses' hoof,forgive the travel expenses. So long as u didnt tottally lose ur breaths, We can construct friendly sentences using simple future tenses. ..................jes the E-me. Last edited by minglemoon; 10-22-2011 at 07:49 AM..

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11-07-2009, 06:27 PM	#6 (permalink)
hazan Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 1 Points: 10.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 10.00 Donate Rep Power: 0	i'mleaving...?

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